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Thinking Out Loud
Poems
Nov 2014
Smothered
Revised version
When we spoke today,
you* made me aware,
that you may feeling
smothered
I was
hurt
by the truth,
and was stung by the
pain,
so, I stopped, reflected and
wondered
I thought about
us,
how I
hoped
it would work
but a girl needs to know that she's
treasured
But you don't
adore
me
or
love
me to pieces
and I make you feel so
encumbered
It's
true
what they say
about how
actions speak
and you act as if you are
censored
You push me
away
when you've had enough
like you're
wishing
our days were
numbered
Now I'll do what you
want
and
extinguish
our flame,
leaving you to breathe deep in the
*blame
Feedback welcomed and appreciated. :)
#love
#relationships
#hurt
#smother
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