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Irate Watcher
Poems
Aug 2014
Lavender Haze (rewrite)
Every night,
L.A. lights
watercolor
the starry night
a lavender haze,
that peeps through
drawn blinds of
mingy minds,
cushioned in cream.
Like
sirens soothe
deaf ears
liquor tickles
numb tongues,
and
pizza sates
greased guts,
pollutionβs hue
clears consciousness,
letting
a city sleep.
What do you all think of this rewrite as compared to the first version?
#sleepless
#nights
#greed
Written by
Irate Watcher
30/F/Denver
(30/F/Denver)
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