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Aug 2014
Suckled
My lower lip swells gently
Like a rose in bud after a summer shower
I have what I

need, I am ready to be opened
I am opening already
And inside, an invitation
That can only be read by

You.

Oh, I came
Here ripe and ready as
the swollen summer moon.

On a sweet, still moment
our fates linger, waiting
On a pregnant, prescient pause.

Quiet, comes the
Quivering storm.
When I originally posted this poem it ended it after the word 'you'. I felt it needed something more, but some people preferred the shorter version, so...it can be read either way, I'd be interested to know which version people prefer.
Amanda In Scarlet
Written by
Amanda In Scarlet  London, UK
(London, UK)   
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