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A Tale Of Two Picnics

The bright sun’s rays

Are dappled as they strike

The manicured greensward.

He, tall, lithe, teeth all aglow

In cream slacks and pastel blouson,

She, fair and fairylike in acres of shimmering gauze,

Alight from the auto

At the site of their ‘manger al fresco’

Let us call them Justin and Jocelyn.

The basket is heavy

No matter.

He lifts it clear to carry

She gasps, he grins.

In minutes the scene is set

The rug, the plates, the glasses

The pate, the cold chicken,

The fruit….the wine.

He deflowers a bottle of Moselle,

Wishing it were her.

Guessing as much she blushes.

Ants retreat to nests

Wasps attack alternate targets

Flies zoom elsewhere to feed.

And all the while the sun

The golden sun continues to dapple.

 

 

The rain is not quite horizontal

As Joe and Judy

Run from the bus stop

To the stony beach.

Not quite horizontal

But driven off the sea it tastes salty.

He, ordinary, average, in a dampening grey mackintosh.

She, hair bleached in a sister’s frock and jacket

Holding hands,

And hold each a sandwich

Cellophane wrapped.

Squatting against the seawall

They eat.

Wet eyes flash bright signals.

Joe has a small thermos

Its vegetable soup,

And somehow a hardboiled egg appears,

To share.

The rain continues its attack.

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Written by
bob-sterrywt
Published
Jul 25, 2014
Lines·Words
44·216
Notes

Growing up in England a picnic was one the most optimistic things one could undertake. Hollywood picnics always seemed so unlikely.

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#love#lust#food#weather#illusion#beach#picnic
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