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Water and Pressure

Physics taught me

that deeper water

has more

pressure,

and it made me think,

about people.

Deep people

were under pressure

because they sank

as they carry

the problems

on their backs.

While shallow people

will just float

and will never

experience

the hidden beauty

of the ocean.

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Bogor, Indonesia

Published: Jul 7, 2014
LinesWords: 1848

Tags: #life #people #water #ocean #pressure

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