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Nails

by don-bouchard

All through the night Heartburn kept him sitting up Stubbornly refusing To read the signs: Indigestion... Heart attack... Hiatal hernia.... Indigestion... Hernia... Heart attack... Heart attack.. Heart attack. By five, he agreed...told Mom Baking soda wouldn't work. His son came in from checking calves, Worrying over the kitchen light, Surprised to see his dad Still sitting on the couch. At, "I guess we could go to town," Son and wife moved into action. "I need some help to dress," he said. His helplessness filled them with dread. First, some socks, but wait.... The nails were long, unkempt. "I haven't been able to bend that far," My brother took Dad's feet in hand, Cut the nails, Wondering how he'd failed To see how fragile, pale, old This man we loved and feared Had somehow suddenly become. There probably wasn't time To trim Dad's nails, What with the heart attack, And all. But one should never head to town unkempt... An old familial rule... And one should cut one's own nails...don't even ask... Another family rule.... And last... Father has the last word... The rule that kept him home all night, Instead of calling 911.
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don-bouchard
66 / M / American
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Written by
don-bouchard
66 / M / American
Published
Jun 21, 2014
Time
2m
Notes

Sometimes the rules need to be broken. Sometimes our respect for authority allows the wrong kinds of roots to go deep enough that when we finally act, it's too late....

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#love#reflection#taboo#nails#familyrules#mores
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