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Dark Jewel
Poems
Jun 2014
Everythings Spinning
The world blurs,
As the storm clouds my vision.
I struggle to stand straight,
I cant stand at all...
My breathing is shallowed,
My head is seeing double..
What is this?
Why am I weak?
Stand... Straight..
I cant see...
This world is spinning,
All around me..
*(faints)
True poem....
#vision
#weakness
#fatigue
#faint
#spinning
#blackout
#blurr
#spikesofpain
Written by
Dark Jewel
20/F/Greenville, SC
(20/F/Greenville, SC)
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