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Give & Take

Trying to be creative with someone looking over your shoulder, even while that someone is giving me a massage is distracting;

nonetheless,

he says he's not looking

but he's too good at lying to me

he always knows what to say

 

even when I don't, like today.

 

Ouu

my shoulders tense from school and work

he raises the pressure in his palms and fingers

rubs me right where it hurts.

 

And though sometimes,

it seems like nothing could ever been worse than this-

 

like now, when he interrupts my train of thought typed out on this keyboard, his loud rap music blaring through his supposedly topline headset, Grand Theft Auto 5 on the screen.

 

Angry lyrics spat through the canals of my ear and continuing their defiance, the intense beat on my drums.

 

The loudness from the slightly broken silence,m

stills my thoughts too a low hum.

 

and so,

I have lost my- was it my train of thought

or inspiration?

thanks alot

 

******* *******

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Written by
biyoekii
28 / F / Canadian
Published
May 15, 2014
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I hate being interupted on a creative spree

"I'm not that much of an ******* you're the ******* he says.

creative liberty baby

xo

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