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Erstwhile

A wicked woman told my love, "Kill him and you will be free." My love paused, and the wicked woman's old twig of a finger pointed off to me. Love walked to me with tearful eyes, as if she had no choice. I smiled wryly and told her in the softness of my voice, "Let it be done, and be free. No sword is long enough to show my love for thee. No dagger, short enough to match my heart's beat. So please my love, take your choice of my death. Choose what would be fit." She didn't hesitate, just cry. She, slowly lifting a mirror from the dust. I don't know why I felt I must, but I wiped the tears away just to savor her touch. I looked into her sad blue eyes, just for one more glance. Then I shut my own. I could feel her lift the mirror, this was her chance, let it be known. A crashing blankness came down on me, soon after the last things I heard. "I'm moving up, and you're moving down." These were her last words. I didn't understand them then, but now I think I know. She will one day be in the warm light, while I'm still stuck in the cold indigo. I'd always run up the down escalator, like a crazy kid. She always said, one day I'd trip. And now I finally did.
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