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Lost at Sea (Pt 4) Revised
I break the surface
As the water recedes,
I'm no longer fighting,
Washed up in the weeds.
I search for the voice
That guides my return,
Breaking the sand
Where the tide has turned.
I crawl like the waves,
Retreating, then strong—
I stand on two feet,
Though the journey is long.
I walk for the hills,
The sun escapes me,
The night draws in,
Moon lights the quay.
I see you waiting
On the pier alone,
You never gave up,
Guiding me home.
The pain in my heart
Washed out at sea—
A burden released,
As you comfort me.
By Darren Wall ©
The final revised part.
#nature
#ptsd
#healing
#sea
#rain
#mentalhealth
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