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Dave Robertson
Poems
Jan 2022
Rude awake
I had a full head of hair and you.
When I woke I had neither,
as the grey frost light
scoured my eyes true awake
I found other lies of the subconscious
hadnβt taken as hard
as your pretend shape
no real surprise, I guess,
but that doesnβt make me hate it less
#love
#dreams
#loss
#subconscious
Written by
Dave Robertson
46/M/UK
(46/M/UK)
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