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Shedding Lives in August

by sunrain

the acorns tumble, the dried leaves slip slowly sideways, each a slow motion death, almost balletic, or acrobatic, the decedents, like bodies on the Field of Hastings, their skeletons to be consumed by a history sucking earthy soil this more than any thing, as much as covid deaths of known older brothers more than the messages on the answering machine from robotic nurses and truly concerned doctors, impatiently waiting to discuss test results with still alive patients four lines in each stanza was unplanned like sets of decades, that the man’s life can be retrospectively be divisibly assayed, each titled, consistent of games and sets, until the last match not on center court, is finale tie-broken, the faults too numerous he writes this unshaken, but stirred, for the hours spent observing, of each trajectory of every fallen leaf is distinctly connected to losses, oh! how the losses multiplied; loves, children, unspoken words of affection and forgiveness, mounted, moats, barriers to fulfillment, a lawn of dead shriveled things, mounting, dear mother of god, all préludes that hasten(ed) the shedding of lives every August!
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