An unloved soul travels a great distance to find peace within itself It flickers and flatters as it cries for help This soul may not be so deserving of love Nor a sweet chocolate dove But it continues to travel in hopes to redeem itself of past sins
The soul sits in a crooked closed cabin Waiting for the love to come in Though it is the soul that needs to come out of its miserable shell Until then it will always remain in a emotional hell Unable to repel the hate that dwells As its feelings swell Its mind becomes unwell It has lost any indication whether or not it's on the right trail
Until a loved soul feeling well comes upon its trail It opens up the closed cabin as it hears the cries for help It comes upon a soul very deserving of love and gave it a hug It traveled a great distance to give peace to the uneased In hopes to cure it In which it would succeed An unloved soul traveled a great distance and found an undeniable hope And at last it can finally breathe
I am working on this poem I don't think it's that great as it is now but I think it has potential can you guys and girls give me some constructive criticism. Thank you.