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Melancholy (2019)

by Frozen-tips

I feel like a husk, a nobody Devoid of thoughts, of custody over myself, over my body. My days are fine, but it's the nights When it's dark, when it's quiet, when there are no lights. I'm wasting away (the opportunities), silent, as I lay (down my arms), ready to surrender (to insecurities); A repeat offender, charged with self harm.
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Published
Jun 19, 2019
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It's a sad-for-no-reason kind of night, but I do also want feedback that will help me improve this piece, so kindly-worded, constructive criticism is welcome!

First venture back into writing. I know it's rough and I'm probably going to work on it eventually... (Maybe split into two different poems...)

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#sad#lonely#alone#night#melancholy#lost#angst
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