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Ray Dunn
Poems
Jun 2019
Begin.
Candle wax, renegades,
cigarettes, and lemonade.
Maybe it’s time to engage
in our ******* crusade?
Ink wells, stormy skies,
footsteps, little lies.
Revolution in her eyes,
our boats in harbor never tied.
Metal clangs, laying down,
boots soaked, name is drowned.
No longer pushed around
but too dead to make a sound
I’ve had the first stanza stuck in my head for WEEKS but I could never write something with it
#revolution
#dramatic
#metaphor
Written by
Ray Dunn
20/F/New York
(20/F/New York)
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