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Concussion

by LynnScotty

Breathe in and out Get to the ball Breathe out and in Try not to fall Breathe in and out Sprint down the field Breathe out and in The strength you wield Breathe in and out You hit them first Breathe out and in Your shoulder hurts Breathe in and out You dribble fast Breathe out and in Get hit at last Breathe in and out Air born you go Breathe out and in Time becomes slow Eyesight blurry You hit your head Eyesight blurry Your nose bleeds red Dark tiny spots Cloud your vision Dark tiny spots Hard collision It all goes dark The pain's still there It all goes dark Blood in your hair Open your eyes You're laid in bed Open your eyes Holding your head Try to get up Think of your name Try to get up Wracking your brain Start to panic No memory Start to panic Eyes that can't see Wet tears stream down Leaving their mark Wet tears stream down Blind in the dark You can not see No one is there You can not see Nobody cares Sitting alone No memory Sitting alone Eyes that can't see
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Mar 12, 2019
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#sad#pain#sports#blind#depressions#dark
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