Is that you my little tigress I see you So covert In oranges shaded in black Peeking through the blades of grass Your eyes darting at my movement We're both in this jungle Called life On this last visit You tiptoe closer Your eye candy melting Vitamin C runs amok My heart beats past your orchard I see your teeth Whiter than the piano keys Lined hungrily Sharper to take me to mill But it's that tounge Carrying a war of words From your tundra you bring lightning My feline is hurt Am I to prey You let out a roar Forsaken are the trees The ground bellies up In sync Your words Carrying me lower in debt Change will be sparse My pockets empty Of heart My eyes, like the mist And wander away from you We cried that night The moon and stars having a front seat The ushers of fate not to be A buzz With Cupid arrows In the feet
Logan Robertson
11/27/2018
Your writer loves to use play on words, homophones. For example mill-meal, thundra-thunder, feline-feeling, prey-pray, foresaken-shaken, debt-depth, sync-sink, like the mist-dismiss, not to be (a bee) a buzz, Cupid arrows in the feet-in defeat. I do remember that night. We both worked at a small hotel. It was the last face to face. It rained. It stormed. I sought better weather. When I look back, and my heart still thinks of her, maybe my thinking was clouded.