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Rose Garden

Nothing...had enchanted me more,

than that big yellow rose...

bright, stunning at the tip of its tall stem,

soft petals.....yet to fully unfurl,

its inner part...a soothing light shaded swirl...

i sniffed a bit of its fragrance,

and felt its softness...but,

i got pricked by a hidden thorn,

---

just a tiny puncture...yet,

my finger bled so much...

---

i walked on through the garden,

...with my pricked finger inside my mouth,

i was amazed by other flowers, more colorful ones,

but, the yellow, pink, red roses outshone them all...

with care this time, i touched a big pink,

slowly.........and, again, i didn't see,

another thorn was in the way

---

it was more painful

it bled even more...

---

i stood thinking, while bleeding...

its beauty, its silky feel...its

fragrance that lingers in the mind

would all be difficult to resist,

the pain from the thorns...harder to forget,

but, i'd still want to walk through this vast

garden....live this life...and seek those roses

feel them...be inspired...over and over

---

never mind the spikes!

never mind the pain!

---

love is beautiful like a rose

a rose is beautiful like genuine love,

there are thorns...hindrances and

hurdles, that come with its beauty....yet,

that wonderful feeling of loving,

and being loved, in return,

the wanting, the longing for it,

never dies...the fear of bleeding,

is ignored,

---

for, what is life without love?

and what is love without pain?

---

isn't love lovelier...more hopeful

the next time around?

---

a rose could never be a rose

without its many thorns...

---

 

Sally

 

©Rosalia Rosario A. Bayan

April 11, 2018

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F / Filipino
Published
May 13, 2018
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HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY TO ALL MOTHERS!!!

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