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Thoughts about Things

by word_eater

There once was a man Who only thought about things And never thought that things Never thought about him. He clamors to the thought Of having more things Without giving his things A thought. The sun would rise The moon would set The moon would rise The sun would set Another day passes Without a thought Till all there was left Was his things.
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Apr 29, 2018
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Open for a critique! this is my first post, and I would like to carry on this theme of writing for my daughter

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