Dec 2017
So long,
my love.
I bid you farewell,
on your journey.
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despite your tragic end,
I don't know how I could ever comprehend.
With every passing day,
I'd be lying if I say I'm okay.
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I miss you.
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If only they knew what I would say
if I could be with you.
Just for tonight.
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Tonight is the night I need you the most,
I wish I could just...
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Breathe
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Be with you tonight, I'd sing you to sleep.
I'd never let the light behind your eyes fade.
and if they did;
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I'd close mine.
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Slip away.
and hope to see you again.
my love.
I bid you farewell,
on your journey.
-
despite your tragic end,
I don't know how I could ever comprehend.
With every passing day,
I'd be lying if I say I'm okay.
-
I miss you.
-
If only they knew what I would say
if I could be with you.
Just for tonight.
-
Tonight is the night I need you the most,
I wish I could just...
-
Breathe
-
Be with you tonight, I'd sing you to sleep.
I'd never let the light behind your eyes fade.
and if they did;
-
I'd close mine.
-
Slip away.
and hope to see you again.
Hello HePo, this is my first poem and also the same one I submitted when I registered but I really wanted to share it with you all as it is my first (actual) poem I've wrote in a long time.
Thank you for listening and taking the time to read my poem <3
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For those that are still here, I will now go through with my ideology of this poem and the story behind it. But please do interpret this in your own way, that's the beauty of such poems.
Story:
The poem tells a story of one's lost love after a tragic accident, which left the author on their own, to deal with the loss. The author goes on to write about how they wish they could just be with them again, to have that one last opportunity to say goodbye, to end up "closing their eyes" conveying that the author will soon be together again with their lover, however way they wish to achieve that.
Thank you for listening and taking the time to read my poem <3
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For those that are still here, I will now go through with my ideology of this poem and the story behind it. But please do interpret this in your own way, that's the beauty of such poems.
Story:
The poem tells a story of one's lost love after a tragic accident, which left the author on their own, to deal with the loss. The author goes on to write about how they wish they could just be with them again, to have that one last opportunity to say goodbye, to end up "closing their eyes" conveying that the author will soon be together again with their lover, however way they wish to achieve that.
