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Donna
Poems
Sep 2017
Oh wow (haikustyle)
In the last few weeks
Hospital appointments bloomed
I felt like a nurse
My children need scans
Tonsils needed removing
Bad back injures
Blood pressure too high
24 hour monitor
Just kept on bleeping
No more salt intake
So does that mean no more sea!
Cause it too salty :)
The hospital was
always packed reminding me
of a busy mall
Some patients in robes
Some in wheel chairs , doctors seem
to be everywhere
Receptionists smile
So many different exits
It's like a big maze
Least it's all sorted
Got the ball rolling for Health
Tis most important
They even had a
costa coffee , my heart jumped
with a cheeky grin
Yeap..hot chocolate
Cumberland sausage sandwich with
caramelised onion!!
Whoever idea
it was to put a costa
coffee there..thumbs up
Wow..fingers cross there
me no more hospital check
ups for a while
As I venture out
The trees are still vibrant green
With few leaves on ground
The sun is beaming
The sky is simply lovely
Cars drive on by
Here comes the red bus
Only a few stops then I'm home
To lazy to walk
: )
It been totally manic lately but all seems to be going steadily well x
#haikustyle
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