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the feeling

by bendo

it begins about mid-evening, the edges of the rug being pulled ever so gently. intoxicated feet do not notice a room slipping beneath them. it hastens nearer to morning; as the magic carpet ride is coming to a close we begin to pat our bodies & notice the things that fell from us. sobriety. clothes. drugs. money.... ego   walls   pain After inventory is taken, the day starts without waiting for your tired eyes. oh, the saddest meeting of eyes, with the swiftest passing of friends, drugs, memories, laughter evening abliss. I am dropped, center stage -- reality. at the same moment the drugs wear off. the last quarter is spent. the first rays of the sun peek through and the last meeting of eyes as the last glimpse of a shoe disappears at the door's edge. the rug has been pulled reality and the curtains have been drawn slumber.
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bendo
28 / Mojave
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Written by
bendo
28 / Mojave
Published
Jul 28, 2017
Time
2m
Notes

I spent too many evenings getting fucked up in hotels and trying to run from everything. this is my declaration of an old cycle

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#cycles#cut#it#out#magic#carpet#ride#intoxicatio
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