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Saoirse
Poems
May 2017
Sleep
When I was young when I wanted the sun to go down it did
Now it goes down without my consent
When I was young when I wanted the sun to stay up it stayed
But now it stays were it wants
Now I must sleep when the sun goes down
Now I must awake when the sun is up
My imagination still runs wild
But for now it sleeps waiting to be awoken
this is my first poem sooo any feed back will help!
#sleep
#sun
#young
#old
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Saoirse
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