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in tense

by @geminiiiiiidk

past simple praise: he loved me but he loved his pain more i pulled him into the bathroom once, it was dark his warm fingers gently plucked at my heart for some time the way we kissed was art his rhetoric far surpassed mine every time he asked me how my day was, i proceeded to word vomit i talked about the most useless shit when i asked him about his, i got a shakespearean fucking sonnet present perfect pain: i have never been good at thinking things all the way through and that is why i've fallen so deeply for people like you
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Dec 14, 2017
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