A beautiful butterfly beams by in the brisk bright morning hours. The alliteration of the first line is enough to make you swoon. Beauty comes in many forms as such as an amazing altogether auspicious line of aggressive, aggrandizing well written word play
But just think of the amount of well written expression that was possible with any of those starter lines.
Instead you are full of nagging narcolepsy that nags at your knees. Falling below even the fewest standards