Deep in the Ocean of Time Right into the layers of space Dwelling through infinite dimensions There existed an atom
It searched for a friend Found one to its taste Lost an electron Gained an electron A bond was then formed
It has no name But there was no worry For name is but an identification
But see there's some more atoms And they too did the same A little bit of sacrifice For love needs it Lost an electron Gained an electron A bond was then formed They started dancing
Growing in complexity. Living things, masses of atoms for they were Dancing a pattern ever more intricate DNA and protein Cells and tissues Life came At long last man came
He was the observer Who measures the universe Out of the cradle Onto the dry land Here it is standing Atoms with consciousness Matter with curiosity Stands in the ocean of time Wondering Aye I, a universe of atoms? Or an atom in the universe?
*To Richard Feynman (again)
Posted long back.
I think this is my best poem (proper) till date. Most of the times I manipulate ideas to twist them into poems (almost all of them very short). But rare few times they flow into a verse of quality. This, I think, is one such, excluding haikus.
Want to see how friends here receive it. Of course few of them might have read it.