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You said you feel warm.

She sits at your side- hands laced into one. unknown if we will lose 0 or 2, the night is unwelcome,     a beast that never sleeps.        Slowly it may grasp you,        fading opposite the rising sun            -i hope. you said you feel warm. you said you like the big blanket     maybe these will be the last of your words,         no I loves you,         no goodbyes,             that's not you're style,             that is not you. I hope his grip is strong. It may be the final one you hold. I hope the last kiss-     frail.     passionate.     a goodbye. is nothing like the first-     strong.     loving.     a hello. of course I am no teller of fates, but- tonight I feel was a goodbye,     a goodbye truly you         simple.             I will never get over how simple-         curt.             fewer words have hardly been spoken-         last. You said you feel warm. You said you like the big blanket. You said the facilities were nice.      All I heard was, It would be okay to die here. It would be okay to say goodbye here.      All I heard was goodbye.
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Jun 28, 2015
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#love#death#good#goodbye#grandfather#bye#ode#grandmother
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