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South by Southwest
Poems
Jan 2015
Congratulations
Congratulations
You proved you could too
Congratulations
Pull the trigger like you said you would do
Congratulations
The bullet entered your brain
There it started to spin
around and around
Congratulations
Then out of your mouth
down it went
and hit the hard ground
Congratulations
There was no one around
They could find no one
Who heard any sound
Congratulations
I remember the times that you said
You needed another man
Like a hole in the head
Congratulations
Well how is it now
Do you think your better off
Now that you're dead
Congratulations
Some say you were just crazy
Certainly now that your gone
You can't argue or dispell
Congratulations
I'm angry and sad
But I guess if the nail fits
Then pound it to hell
Congratulations
I bid thee farewell
Congratulations
You were my really so swell .
#suicide
#bullets
#goodbye
#brains
#rice-or-noodles
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