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Total Eclipse

by christopher-k-bayliss

The man in the moon has a big conundrum cause he can't always talk to his good friend the sun for he is tucked away, kept out of sight, for when the suns out the moon sees the night. There once was a time he was part of the earth, till a comet collided for all it was worth. The earth was surprised with the immediate shock and the loss of a massive, great big piece of rock. That great piece of rock, far off it did zoom from big brother earth, now the man in the moon. Every time the sun comes to play, the moons bigger brother, 'the earth's,' in the way. His brother of course, will pass messages on but it isn't the same as a chat with the sun. But once in a while the moon he can mix with his good friend the sun in a total eclipse. When part of the earth he saw the sun once a day till that comet then crashed and sent him far away. But somehow they managed their friendship to fix and all with the help of the total eclipse. They get to catch up, but not for too long for they soon take there places, go home where they belong. The total eclipse is a lifeline that ends but for a short time it helps puts together two friends
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Published
Jan 3, 2015
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There is always a way to keep a friend!

3rd January 2015.

Happy New Year

to all of my friends here on HP.

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#sun#moon#eclipse#collision#brother#seperation#comet
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