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They strut on stilts through shifting sand,
With spectacles of top name brand,
Each cap a crown, each shoe a throne
Postcodes etched in polished stone.

They sip from cups of gilded flair,
And toast to titles they declare,
While whispering, “I’m more than you,”
Because their tie is navy blue.

Value gauged in vehicle worth,
In marble sinks and stomach girth,
In schools that teach deportment pride,
And gates that keep the poor outside.

Taught to climb the social stair,
To find there's little waiting there
But mirrors framed in empty gold,
Reflecting youth that’s growing old.

They name-drop Gods and CEOs,
Wear virtue stitched in tailored clothes,
Speak in tongues of cultured grace,
While tripping on their own shoelace.

They build their thrones on shifting trends,
And call their rivals “former friends,”
Then post a smile, rehearsed and bright,
To prove their faces bathed in light.

In Kyoto’s hush, the bow is deep,
The high-born dine while low-born sweep,
No mingling here the ranks are sealed,
Each gesture weighed, each truth annealed.

In London clubs, the laughter’s staged,
Where accents mark the class engaged,
A vowel misplaced, and doors are shut
The butler knows when “ifs” are “buts.”

And deep beneath this human play,
The granite dreams in slow decay,
It does not care for suits or fame,
It only knows its molten name.

But lo! The stars don’t care for rank,
Nor rivers pause for titled bank,
The earth rolls on, absurdly wise,
While man performs his grand disguise.

So laugh, dear friend, at pomp and fuss,
At all the noise that isn’t us
For in the end, the truth unfurled:
We’re specks that dream we own the world.

M@Foxglove.Taranaki.NZ
4 October 2025
Across these cultures, the markers shift—sometimes it’s lineage, sometimes language, sometimes the car you drive or the school you attended. But the underlying question remains: Who gets to belong?  

And perhaps the deeper inquiry is not just about mixing, but about transcending. Can one’s character, creativity, or contribution ever outweigh inherited status? Or are we all, in some way, performing acceptability to gain entry into rooms we were never meant to enter?
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“Cult” implies blind devotion, an absurd reverence people show toward status symbols and social hierarchy, whilst “Class” is both literal and metaphorical: economic strata, social performance, inherited privilege, where the invisible codes that govern belonging and worth... are worshipped, not earned!.

M@Foxglove.Taranaki.NZ
August, the Red Line,
connected tanks
of bolted plastic vertebrae.

Every seat gone except
five rows up, where a sea lion
sprawls across two,
stuffed backpack, jacket
spread like barbed wire.
His grunt a wet bark
at the glow of his screen.

Middle-school deer slip into the aisle,
chatter clipped when the sheriff drifts past,
their ears flicking, smiles bitten shut.

Not a predator- just a gelded ox,
chest puffed, badge sagging, glass-eyed,
chest rig clattering with blanks.

Two lemur-children cling to their tortoise elder,
her shell steady against the sway of the car.

She filters them from the surge of riders:
loud Dodger blue parrots in cholo socks,
moth-women with painted lashes beating the stale air,
a stray dog, gutter musk dragging at its haunches.

And one gray bear

muttering alone,
arguing with her reflection.

Between Koreatown and MacArthur Park
I feel feathers forcing through my skin-
an alley gull knifing into this clamour,
scavenging inside its exhaust.

The car rattles, its ribs plated with blistered posters:
museum wings open to no one,
‘register to vote’ fading into graffiti script,
flu shots promised by smiling ghosts.

A bruised hatchling staring out beside the words
See something, say something.

The warning lights glow
like eyes hunting in the dark.

From its flanks the train
unfurls iron claws.

They rake
the tunnel walls,
the city’s bones,
the dark itself.
  Sep 30 Marshal Gebbie
F Elliott

The assassin’s shadow lay prone on the rooftop,
a cut-out against the sky..
seen, but not seen,
because to look up
would mean breaking the spell of the herd.

The Mauser barked,
not of metal alone but of voices,
defending their defenses
with bullets made of shadow..

Fear dressed as Light,
cowardice crowned as virtue.

And all the while,
truth bled on the pavement,
not from weakness,
but because the many chose
silhouette over substance,
projection over sight;

safety over the one who dared to see.


What was unseen in the assassin’s silhouette was not mere stealth,
but the supreme ability of unresolved trauma
to project its unowned shadow.
Jung described this as the scapegoat phenomenon:
the psyche, unable to face its own contents,
casts them outward onto a mirror.
Those who reflect most faithfully..
who reveal what others most fear to acknowledge..
become the chosen targets.

And yet, the silhouette was there, in plain sight.
Had anyone looked up, or turned back,
the rooftop figure would have been exposed
before the finality of the killshot.
But blindness is often willful.
It is easier to condemn the mirror
than to confront the shadow.

This is participation mystique inverted:
a collective possession that feeds on denial,
mistaking projection for enlightenment.
In such a state, the more accurate the reflection,
the more violent the rejection.

Hello Poetry,  through the  writings
and behaviors of the inaccurately self-named “enlightened ones,”
has become a digitized Lord of the Flies novel.
Here the shadow unowned within
makes its supreme projections
onto those who mirror back the very truths most refused.
And in this inverted theater,
those who dare to stand in the light know the risk:
to be mocked, scapegoated, or silenced.

Only weeks before his assassination,
Charlie gave voice to this risk with startling clarity.
In an interview, almost casually,
he foresaw the violence to come.
The cowboy-hatted host.. deeply respectful
but unable to hide his nervous chuckle..
couldn’t contain the humanity of the moment.
But what sounded like a jarring aside was prophetic.
His own death proved how perilous it is
to mirror back to the world what it most refuses to face.

https://youtube.com/shorts/cn1Hlmepjzs?si=xBF_9hv6r0H3O0sw


With an etching tool of contempt,
he scribbled his verse upon the brass..
the 30-06 casing itself becoming his page.
Chambered into the Mauser, set high above the herd,
it was not lead that truly flew, but shadow.
The round carried a darker payload:
cowardice, projection, envy, and fear..
all the unowned unknown within,
hurled outward and named as strength.
What struck was not flesh alone, but the mirror..
for every shot fired in hatred is nothing
but the poet of death inscribing
his refusal to face the truth of himself.

Thus Hello Poetry becomes a parable of the age:
where verse can be weapon or witness,
where the coward cloaks his projection in the pretense of light,
and where the mirror itself is targeted..
because it reflects what they cannot bear to see.

And so the seduction grows. Their “poetry” is not art but incantation,
a counterfeit enchantment meant to draw others into orbit.
They parade it as “consensual,”
as if their words carried some hidden power of dark magic,
when in truth it is only the glamour of unhealed shadow.
For those who resist, their verse twists further,
becoming ritual.. not of beauty, but of control.
They posture as sages, yet their chants are little more
than incoherent, never ending streams of self-aggrandizing babble mistaken for wisdom.
The herd expands not by illumination,
but by spellbound imitation of the blind.

And so it stands: Hello Poetry is not an isolated tragedy,
but a small stage upon which the greater play unfolds..
a digitized echo of the world itself,
where the unowned shadow writes its violence in verse,
and the battle between projection and truth continues without cease.

Elliott no longer owns the site;
it is now ruled by those who wield the same contempt
rising in the world itself..
the cowardice, the fear, the deep envy
of those who dare to hold the mirror clearly.

A true family man... kind-hearted and well-meaning..
poor Elliot has over time just become their puppet;
and his one-time long-ago beautiful creation
unwillingly has become just another poorly inscribed casing.

Pray for that good man,
that he either gathers the strength to shutter this place
or to cleanse it of its parasites.
For as it stands, his once-beautiful creation has been seized,
turned into another casing scrawled with the graffiti of the cowardly..
fired endlessly at the mirrors of truth.
One must believe in something be he misanthrope or gambler
In tomorrows omniscience or the future proof of God
The penance in a drunk's decay sets self destruct's imposer
Wether speaker phone's on disconnect or cellphone's in the bog.

Conveyance of a threat to adherents of St Selfwise
Show atheist's are proof here, in belief of disbelief,
Haunted by the images painting painful retribution
Picture sympathetic **** star's allocated hand relief.

A moments allocation of a syllogist abstraction
Shows perspective of the caliber we now reserve for Saints
A paradox regarded as autistic fascination
In a one act play of living disregarding all restraints.

Deliberately indicative of fraternal heat's expression
Notebook at the ready and deep frowning at the brow,
Question definition's collage of confusion's contribution
Do we sit it out pretending or just catch the late bus now?

M.
13 February 2014
© 2014 Marshal Gebbie
A conveyance of a threat to adherents of St Selfwise...An invented saint for the Age of the Self Righteous!
Both a mockery and a mirror.
"Do we sit it out pretending or just catch the late bus now?"
A perfect existential shrug!
This one's got teeth, and it bites with purpose.
An oldie but a goody....and I was three parts cut when I wrote it!

M@Foxglove.Taranaki.NZ
He stood alone, the stars grown dim,  
One hand on rectitude’s thin limb.  
No wrath, no fire, no final plea—  
Just silence in eternity.  
He wept not for what man became,  
But for the dream that bore his name.

M@Foxglove.Taranaki.NZ
A visualization, sepia toned, on a high, remote plinth....arm draped around rectitude. ....overlooking the ash and ruin.
Devastating, with a curious beauty , yet a tragedy where resignation and sorrow entwine for the lost ideals of what, once, might have been.
M.
Neandertal of mortal man
Whose memory did live and span
Through countless generations spun,
portraying you, the only one.
You lived and died, you laughed and cried.

And randomly, you caste about
To find yourself.....your Maker's shout?


Began for thee a tiny mote,
Which grew in increments of hope,
That echo in the empty room
Which died a catatonic boom!


Out of nothing you appeared
A shadow grew and then careered
Spontaneously you simply knew
Correctly when and what, to do....
You lived and died, you laughed and cried.

Brilliant mathematic play,
Prescient in your Makers ' way?

Began for thee a tiny mote,
Which grew in increments of hope,
That echo in the empty room
Which died a catatonic boom!

For centuries you kept the peace,
Restrained the enmities, release.
Lived conjointly well with man
Interbreeding with the plan.....
You lived and died, you laughed and cried.

A patterned engineering day
Which coalesced your Maker's way?

Began for thee a tiny mote,
Which grew in increments of hope,
That echo in the empty room
Which died a catatonic boom!

Then you left, you simply went
As if your energies were spent,
As if the work was now complete
The impetus left at your feet.
You laughed then cried; then finally died.....

The silence in the empty room
Resounded to your Maker's loom!

M@Foxglove.Taranaki.NZ
28 September 2025
An exercise for the October HP Zoom group.
The topic: ALIEN

Note: Anybody who wishes to may participate in this challenge.
and may do so by joining the Zoom in late October.
Details to be published in HP later in the month.
Cheers M@Foxglove.Taranaki.NZ
  Sep 26 Marshal Gebbie
irinia
a woman's passion is a fiction of the sun
a radiance that forms and lingers
it's time burning like a rag in a guttering flame
it flickers, it spits a storm, a moment's certainty
a lifetime's doubt
it is the whisper of the wind in barren trees
a crucible for gravity's fervor
a silence dreaming its imploded sounds
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