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The day has a beatific smile
and the sun adds glamour
shimmering rays
dancing in perfect harmony
aroma in the wind
intoxicates the soul
another opportunity today
to dance to it's tune
you said
you don't like me
taking too much care of you,
does that mean,
my love hurts you
like the way it hurts me?????
WRITE A POEM ABOUT WHAT YOU WOULD SPECIFICALLY WANT YOUR DREAM GUY OR GIRL TO BE LIKE AND POST IT AS A POEM! MESSAGE ME OR COMMENT TO LET ME KNOW IF YOU ACCEPTED THE CHALLENGE AND WROTE ONE SO I CAN CHECK OUT YOUR POEM!
INCLUDE THE HASHTAG #CHALLENGE IN THE TAGS SECTION!
CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOU COME UP WITH!

PLEASE REPOST SO AS MANY PEOPLE AS POSSIBLE CAN GET INVOLVED IN THE CHALLENGE! :)
I wrote a poem called I like the type of boy... which was along these lines, so try doing something like that if you don't really understand what the challenge is.
... eat other peoples
poetry then

***** all over the page.


(C) SoulSurvivor
Despicable...
does it hurts you
to say "i love you"
when you really
want me to love you,
more than anything???
Sometimes I hold my hands
Out of my bedroom window
To feel the rain
Dance across my skin

Its music
Is the wind
And it moves me
Like the most beautiful
Symphony
She broke her heart.
She snapped it.
It was a little fragile.
She let him play with it.
Teasing and tormenting it.
He used it like a rubber ball.
Bounced it round and bruised it.
He made her pretty eyes sob an ocean.
His eyes were terrific.
Her eyes were too.
His eyes were her main attraction.
His hair was thick and black.
Hers was reddish and shiny.
Glinted in the morning sun.
Evening tumbled from the day time sky.
As she smiled and kissed him goodbye.
(C) LIVVI
She was a concrete angel
In a darkened valley
And he, was the freezing rain
Seeping into her smallest pores
Before freezing, expanding
Breaking her at the seems
Bits of stone, falling away
Shattering at her feet,
Rolling deeper into the valley
She watched them fall,
Saddened by their decent
Continuously eroded away
As he poured over her  
Never ceasing, never warming
She shrinks into her stone tomb
Encased in the safety of her angel shell
Away from the freezing cold
His constant pitter patter
Raindrops echoing around her
Slowly, slowly, it becomes comforting
Slowly, slowly, he begins to feel her warmth
Slowly, slowly, the stone chips away
Slowly, slowly, they are exposed to eachother
For the first time, she sees the sunlight
Beyond her stone tomb
But he? he never warmed
And she? She was still left out in the cold
Remembering the safety of her concrete shell
And the constant sound of the pitter patter
From before, when she thought he would warm
Stone can't warm the rain, nor can it resist erosion.
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