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Alice Kay Dec 2012
"If she makes it though the night, she will survive," the doctor said.

I can hear her word faintly, in the sub-consiousness on my brain...

                                                                                                                                               coma

"When a heart breaks, it can cause the body to go into shock, and that can result in a coma, if the body can't handle it," the doctor tried to explain. "The risks are increased especally of the heart is still in recovery."

"Has she broken her heart before?" she asked.

"Not that we know of, she is always happy" comes the response.

if only they knew... i think..as i slip

completely

                    into
                            
                              obliviation
Marilyn Sistinas Dec 2016
When did conversation become argumentation?
This form of abuse derived from self irritation,
just drives me in the opposing direction of where you'd like me to go,
there's many destinations that I haven't been shown,
cultivation leading me to venture on my own.
You push and shove for me to grow up already,
but agitation won't make it easier to speed through others lined up in front of me.
If you could just see how much I've been through,
most of it alone, if you could view just how far I've kept motivation,
then someday we might actually get close to were we've been heading this whole time.
Line after line and you have yet to add any up,
you haven't seen my determination, for you just blame it on luck.
Whim did consideration become mediation?
I've lived every waking moment, just for your approbation,
now, everything I've done is incorrect?
The treacherous miles I've overcome are now obliviation I'm your head,
every turn I make just ends up being another mistake.
Something along the lines of aggretion,
which in turn left us were we orginally started, or stopped.
You always try and take me where you want me though I've come so far already.
Sometimes the places you unexpectedly end up are where you're actually supposed to be.
flowers01 Jun 2013
Take my breath away
I dare you
Never again will you hurt me
Never again will you put me in the dark room
Where I pound on the walls screaming and looking for a way out
             Breath
I will tear down the walls
down, down they will go and you
You will go down with them into obliviation
To never be seen again
              Breath
I will look into the future and see you gone
The future me turns and looks to the heavens with a smile
               Breath
Happy and joyous with you out of my life
Take my breath away
I
Dare
You
Dennis Willis Sep 2019
Hooomans are fascinating
they cannot tell the difference
between their imaginations
and their immediate surroundings
This presents opportunities
to tilt at things you don't understand

the pretense of your own scent
lilac and sumac

old scents
lent forward

I scramble back from this precipice
sent from the accidental bureau

cold sweet mix of ice and sugar and
obliviation

of guessing around the corner
with tequila

not about that
not about this

spinning of feeling
into sound

ablating

blasted off molecules
regroup in a neighborhood bar

as if they lost a softball game
dang

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