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avery Nov 2018
I actually would like some feedback on my latest poem, I spent forever on it hoping everyone would like it but ended up not going anywhere
help me out?
avery Nov 2018
we mistake a small cold
for a chronic illness leading to death
we mistake a bad grade
for failed success that leads to a job at McDonald's
we mistake a bad haircut
for a complete unattractiveness that leads to being alone
we mistake an awkward look
for a social downfall in today's botched society
we mistake a bad day, a horrible week, an ugly year
for a permanent lifestyle leading to suicide
the sun will come up
don't end the day before it has finished
  Oct 2018 avery
Alex Hart
Small fights mean nothing
when we are able to get past the
and
be strong through all of it.
  Oct 2018 avery
Alex Hart
Problems, I'm failing
being yelled at for failing
and failing more.
No one will help me figure out what
I'm doing so I can't stop failing.
What do I do?
I'm in trouble.....
  Oct 2018 avery
Alex Hart
Without rain
Nothing grows,
Learn to embrace
The storms of your life.
Because after every storm
A rainbow follows
  Oct 2018 avery
abbey
the words spilled from her mouth

here i sit,
as my best friend,
tells me
you have another.

i shouldn’t care.
but i do.

no matter how hard i try,
the poetry for you in which i write,
never ceases.
it just keeps pouring out of my soul.
it sometimes seems as if,
the poetry i write for you is what keeps my heart beating.
what keeps me breathing.

but now, what am i supposed to do?
her?
seriously?
do you think she will love you?
do you really think she will love you?
please tell me.

it’s hard to think of you with another
because we used to be so in love with each other.

it’s been a long time since we last spoke,
but it feels as if all the memories of us i have were just made yesterday.

you have another.
who will never,
ever,
love you in the way i could.

but my question for you is,
will you love her in the way you could towards me?
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