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The Jolteon Nov 2014
You are constantly changing
In my eyes
And for that I am thankful
I viewed you once
With a youthful uncertainty
That still lingers to this day
But this has changed
Irrational uncertainties exchanged for concrete ones
The mess of the city
That has grown upon you
Is and has always been my home
For better or for worse
But I have found beauty
In all of your forms
I found flowers that you have grown
That are truly beautiful to behold
I have found books
Inspired by your wonder
That refuse to be content
With those who plunder you and your inhabitants
I have found suffering
I have found hope
I have found you
In response to Born's poem challenge "Dear Earth"
The Jolteon Dec 2014
Your words are truly beautiful
They paint the page
Dance in front of my eyes
Your words flow as surely and as calmly as the ocean
There is a peace in the writing
There is love and honesty in the writing
There is a connection with the honesty of life that I feel in the words
And I thank you for your beautiful poems

Below are excerpts from some of my favorite poems by ShowYouLove:

these are the things i love:

These are some things I love

Fresh baked bread and homemade apple pie
A long happy day concluded with a tired sigh
Friends that are forever and love that is pure and true
Spending time with those I love and when I think of you
Being there for those in need and ones that are suffering
To take a bad day make it happy and the joy we bring


I love these lines as they blend all of the truly simple pleasures - good food, time happily spent, good friends, thinking of those you love. Very beautiful words.

Regrets (Going Home):

I might have done things differently if so
I have come to understand a little a purpose far greater than me
Life is more than just a job, money, or nice things I believe
It is family, it is love, it is a something that you feel
In your heart, in your soul, and it is very real
Helping others, taking care of yourself, being there, showing love
These are all things that matters most if push comes down to shove
Then again it’s not too late to try to reconcile
I’ll take responsibility for consequences and go the extra mile
The only thing I would ask is to keep me in your prayers
And that you know wherever you go someone really cares
The song changes, the light turns and I continue heading home
To a place I can go back to no matter how far away I might roam


This is one of my favorite poems. I love how honest and open the poem is. It recognizes faults but also shows how it's never too late to show your love to someone else and to express gratitude and ask for forgiveness. I find this poem to be amazing and inspiring.

Make It Better:

I want to be your salt, I want to be your light
To chase away the dark of night and say that it'll be alright
But I can't do any of this and it hurts me to the core
To see you suffer and not be able to help more


I like this passage because I think it expresses a feeling everyone has had in their life where they desperately want to help someone but can't. There is something sad and beautiful about this shared emotion.

Fragile Treasure:

But under proper circumstances we can bloom and flourish too
And we can bring harm or joy to others; the choice is up to you
Life is short and is a precious treasure
True beauty and worth are something only God can measure
Treat all life with care and respect
For each one is sacred and hand select


I love this poem and this passage because it shows how positive your writing is. I think it reflects the respect you have for life and that is beautiful!

Insecurities:

When the light is fading fast, remember it's only in your mind
The past is gone, you can't go back and try once more
Now to remember not dwell and to look forward
Learn and grow
Your insecurities have no real control


I really enjoyed this because it again takes an idea that all people have shared - insecurities - and puts a positive outlook on it. Again it feels very honest to me and that is why I love it.

Thank you again ShowYouLove for your poetry. Your words really do inspire me and so many of your poems really resonate and connect with me and for that i am thankful.
This was in response to the Dear Blank Challenge. A great idea!!!
The Jolteon Dec 2017
Looks like I'm smoking
But I'm just breathing
Looks like I'm choking
But I'm just heaving
Up comes everything
That ever kept me down
I feel like drinking
But I'm scared I'll wash away
The Jolteon Nov 2014
Money
Is an
Idea
The idea is only as real
As the value we give to the paper
Poverty and wealth
Are results of this idea
Poverty and wealth are ideas in themselves
But these ideas, like money, are only as real
As the value we give to them
In everyday life, many of us subscribe to these ideas
And give value to them
Value to money, value to wealth, value to poverty
We give value to money
By honoring it
By abiding by it
By bending to it
We give value to wealth
By celebrating it
By upholding it
By defending it
We give value to poverty
By affirming it
By ignoring it
By accepting it
Money, Wealth, Poverty
Are all ideas that we live with
Many people I have talked to and many books that I have read
Have better ideas
Ideas that do not involve
Corruption, collusion, death, misery, squalor, neglect, indifference
Ideas that encourage
Living, breathing, eating, enjoying, participating, laughing, caring
These ideas live inside us
It is time they dominate outside us as well
The Jolteon Dec 2014
I swear I’ve been here before
Felt this before
Is this a look
Into alternate lives
That have crossed over
Into each other
I wonder what decisions I made
In the other life
Who I was before
Who I am after
I wonder if the other life
Wonders the same thing
About this life
If it turned out
We both wanted to switch
What would be the purpose
The best part
About dreaming a reality
Is that you realize
Your own reality is a dream
As well
The Jolteon Oct 2017
We like making plans
But never execute them
You like making friends
I'm not as cute as them
So you tell me to go with you
Across several states
Stupid me I'm naive
I thought this was a date
You cancelled me
Like the order
You'll never
Recieve
When the person you like constantly makes big plans with you and always cancels them
The Jolteon Apr 2018
On a good day
My body’s up in flames
Burning from head to toe
In the guilt built on anxiety
On a bad day
I’m completely gone
Waiting for my time
To leave this place behind
PLEASE SEEK HELP FOR SUICIDAL THOUGHTS OR FRIENDS. This poem is about feeling sad, anxiety, loneliness and dealing with it all day to day
The Jolteon Jul 2018
When all you do
Is get beaten down
You forget your own power

Willing to tolerate
Friends that treat you like ****
Lovers that beat you

When you grow up
In this world
As one of the oppressed

You internalize everything
It becomes you
You are complacent within it

Until you realize
Your own power
It comes bursting out

Saying **** capitalism
Propped up by racism and sexism
**** the oppresssor free the oppressed
The Jolteon Dec 2014
Sometimes
I am like water
Too scared
To go on land
Feeling safer
Surrounded by what is familiar
The Jolteon Dec 2014
Where did the fire go
You talked of blood diamonds
Slave labor
And imperialism
Now you sit on a couch
With that rock on your hand
Weighing you down
The Jolteon Jul 2017
The love of your
Life
Is just one swipe
Away

Swiper no swiping
Now
Your love's gone
Away
The Jolteon May 2017
It's real easy
To **** **** up
It only takes
One
Thing
Blink
Sink
Rust
At the bottom
The Jolteon Apr 2015
Sometimes when you see
All the dots
You don't want to
Connect them
That's when your heart and soul
Come in
To paint the picture
Reveal to you what you must see
Title taken from aaf song
The Jolteon Oct 2016
Shed your bias
Shed your fears
Go on ahead
Its ok
Shed some tears

Now get up
Pick your getup
Smile wide
Try a walk on the wild side

Put up your hair
Or let it down
Pick up the lipstick
Paint your frown

Get some blush
A little mascara
Do up your brows
Get it goin Leon Sierra

Put on your dress
With your favorite song
Don't be ashamed
That you're wearing a thong
The Jolteon Oct 2014
Keep imagining your dreams
Until they are reality
If that reality is false
Dream up new dreams
Then make those a reality

Do not let lost souls
Guided by a tainted heart
Determine your existence
They will if you let them
They have lost their own

Even if your dream
Is never a reality
You create a path
For others to follow
To their own dreams
The Jolteon Nov 2014
What is the point
Of these dreams that we have?
Surely they are there to show us
The ugliest and most beautiful things within ourselves
To let us decide which we should dream
Into reality
The Jolteon Sep 2014
I have been dreaming during the day
And sleeping at night
The sleep is to make the dream eternal

Wake
Up

You have to dream
The Jolteon Oct 2017
I guess I’m dreaming about you know
After I wake up thinking about you
I have to go back to sleep
Just to be with you
The Jolteon Jan 2015
The most abused of them all
That bitter taste
The bite of fire
Liquor and beer
The murkey and the clear
One of the coolest
Joe cool
Blow like city breeze
As romanticized as diamonds
Just as ****** - cigs
The Doctors choice (orders?)
Gets you revved up
Shot to the moon and back
With complete concentration
Amphetamine aka Adderall
The Jolteon Jan 2015
I waited away
For that time of day
Where you would disappear from me
Be on your way
The feeling of Fall
The leaf on the branch
The gusts of wind
The fallen dance
When will you be back
Like a dream never ending
The Jolteon Jul 2018
4 pieces of clothes
I'm in a puddle
Two words
I've evaporated
One look
I'm frozen
One kiss
I'm dead
The Jolteon Oct 2017
All these
Cute
Hippie
Chicks

We're more interested
In learning about one another
Than in fighting
One another

Hippie kids
Used to smoking ****
Hanging out with friends
Falling in love with lovers
The Jolteon Aug 2018
Crack the top
Pour it all out
Drips thicker than tears
More concentrated
Version of all my fears
It still seems to burn
All of the nights are seared
But I move on

Death and denial
All bottled inside
Friends only want to see
A wild side
Willing to pour my life
Down my throat
So they can see me
Act a ******* fool

Maybe just maybe
If I take one more sip
I could stomach
All your ****
Just grit my teeth
Let the bourbon take the hits
POUR THAT **** OUT
The Jolteon Jan 2015
Fill up the liver
Fill it till it drowns
And eats through the organs
Fill up the mind
Turn up the tv and drown
**** off all braincells
Fill up the lungs
Hot with smoke
Until they collapse or disappear
Fill up the cup
Overflowing with coffee
Revved up 24/7 until heart attack
The Jolteon Jun 2017
**** it I guess
I'm just trying to
Pay my mom's rent

What am I doing
Stay up too late
Don't get enough sleep

I'm just trying
To help change the world
For the better

I'll help you
You help me
I'm just trying
To help change the world
For the better

I'll help you
You help me
I'm just trying
East Palo Alto
San Francisco/Sucka Free City
The Jolteon Jun 2015
Even in my dreams
I worry about how
Much beer I got
Even when I sleep
I turn over
All those thoughts
With no escape for peace
My mind is working
Off the clock
Even all these trees
Can't seem to block
All these memories
The Jolteon Oct 2016
When I wake up in the night
I already regret you
Palms and arms sweating
Wanting to consume you
I get up in the morning
Seeing you sit there empty
Hating who I am
With and without you
But as day turns back to night
Something inside me burns
I reach out to you once again
Just so I can watch myself drown
This song is about alcoholism and I hope everyone treats alcohol as a drug and remains catious when it enters your life
The Jolteon May 2015
Take away safety
Nets what do you
Get people jumping
Off the golden gate
Bridge the gaps
Are so wide they
Will swallow you
Whole parts of
Communities destroyed
Jobs vacated faster
Than empty apartments
Come hear the songs
Of poverty and crimes
Against humanity
Shutting off vital
Water to families
Where is our pension
Supposed to come from
Good jobs but those
Don't exist in a broken
Democracy of oligarchs
The Jolteon Jan 2018
Dear the wildest one
That I never won
I tried my best hand
At the races
But I came up short
Too many fours and fives
No aces

Dear the warmest one
I chased you away
You kept me close at night
Like a mother would read
To a son

Dear the violent one
I tried and tried
You decided to stay
You lost your mind
I guess I paid
The Jolteon Jan 2015
Put the ciggarettes down
Pick the **** up
Let your lungs heal
The mind filled with poisons
No more
Cleanse and reflect
The addiction
Addiction
Addiction
Is manufactured
3x as addictive
Guaranteed
For you to lose money health
Put them down
The singing box
Opens like a juke box
But you always know the song
It's one of skull and bones
Let's pick up the green music
Play loud
Smoke on
Without the death of those around you
The love will surround you
Let it in
The herb is good
The smoke is good
Blow like trees
The Jolteon Dec 2014
The look
Does not matter
It feels like razors inside
Slicing each blade of beautiful grass
The mind is abandoned
Leaving the body
To ache
The Jolteon Dec 2014
What is failure
Who defines it
You
Or someone else
Scratching your eyes out
To block a hideous creation
A
"Failure"
You've been told to hate
Until 100 years later
You are rediscovered
As a genius
Ahead of their time
A passed over success
Now 100 years gone
Love yourself
No one else can tell you
What you love
What you think is beautiful
What you think is right
What you think perfection is
The Jolteon Jul 2015
Falling numbers
Breathing airwaves
Signals change
Clouds remain
The light it flickers
Through the door
Heavy breathing
Anchored floors
The Jolteon Jun 2018
I loved being with you
Everyday was like a dream
Right after it happened
Feeling so serene
Every kiss with you
Was like the sweetist dream
Thoughts of sunrises
And golden fields
Are what dot
All my memories of you
Reading blankets
On rolling hills
Smoking bongs
And little bottles of champagne
Falling asleep under the sun
Falling in love with the thought of you
The Jolteon Nov 2017
Keep trying to be
Something I’m not
How haed can
It really be
To be true to yourself

Trying so hard to be
Someone I want to be
Myself
Be myself
In the person
Who is the best of me
The Jolteon May 2015
Don't call past
Loves up
Someone's bound
To throw something up
Or throw someone out
Forever from their lives
Or at least find out
Where they find themself now
The Jolteon Nov 2014
The son asks the father
Why did you do that
Why did you act like that
The father looks at the son
And says
You'll see one day
Just wait and see
You'll find out one day
The Jolteon Apr 2017
One taste
One touch
One mic
I hit and come
Right back
I bleed
I leak
I need
Fiend
The Jolteon Feb 2019
Fighting myself to come out
Fighting to be who I am
Fighting to be comfortable
Fighting for myself
And for those around me
Loving myself as I am
Loving my fears and my mistakes
Loving my faults and tears
Loving everything I thought I hated
The Jolteon Feb 2015
A silent emptiness
To rock us to sleep
The phone holds meaning
Only to which it is given
Popping up
Randomly like in bloom
It's hard to pin you down
I want you to see
Painted like a picture
I've kept smudge free
The Jolteon Aug 2017
The depth of
The ocean
Or as shallow
As a kids pool
What are you
Looking for
The Jolteon Nov 2014
Firsts are incredible
Because everyone goes through them
There is so much to experience
So many firsts
The Jolteon Sep 2017
In a world
Of broken relationships
And dating apps

I've honestly
Forgotten
What it means

To care about
Someone
Else

To make
A good
Impression

To take it
Slow
And wait

To wait
And see
What grows

I'm just
Too ready
To throw it away
The Jolteon Feb 2018
Always say I love you
To the girls I meet
Anyone who gets dinner with me
I go down and eat
The Jolteon Jul 2015
Picturesque moments
Flood your time zone
All the way down
You had a smile on your face
What it takes
To finally get away
At home your heart breaks
Now you're miles away
The Jolteon Nov 2014
I climb
Up the Bay Bridge
From an entrance near the bottom
I climb
Up the sides of the bridge
Reaching the top ledge
As I close my eyes
I jump off
Towel stretched out behind me
I soar, gliding over the water
Weaving in and out
I start to lose speed
Too far from the bridge
I fear falling into the deep cold bay
As I lose speed
Heart racing
I barely make it
To the ledge again

Take a deep breath
The building is tall
Showing The City
I close my eyes
And walk towards the edge
Stretching the towel behind me
Eyes still shut
Someone yells no don't do it!
As if I'm about to commit suicide
And I lose my focus
Stepping back from the edge
Saying now I can't do it
This was a dream I had
The Jolteon May 2015
Desire acceptance
Give a strong front
Dig a little deeper
It's not as much fun
The Jolteon Oct 2016
All youve seen is jokers your whole life
Until we happen to meet
You think you see honesty at your feet

Is it really my fault that everyone before
Only knew how to drop their drawers
In hopes of you droppin yours?

That I like to take my time to tap into you
Uncover your mind
To see whats inside

You think youve met someone real
And as real as it may be
Honestly I just want to **** for free
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