Devoted to your second hand
Your electrifying
Admonishment your embrace solidifying
a swirling technicolor land
(move)
Meant along your path engroove,
bring
error receiver much to be desired
just a bit of inspiration. tried for some cummingsesque spacing imagery; wasn't in the mood for a traditional sonnet. i included a bit of wordplay, so have fun picking them out. and yes, on line 2 I intentionally used that form of "your."
