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Train's Coming

by @jordan-weir

waiting for the subway I stand as close to the yellow as possible, tempting some force of God. you stand at a distance watching people like me, nervous, believing you can hold us back with the invisible string of your eye.
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Dec 14, 2014
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Written November 1, 2014

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#life#god#death#waiting#train#testing#subway#tempting
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