When writing poems there is no right or wrong. It may be plain or sound just like a song. Heroic couplets aren’t the only way. Yet people always have to have their say.
It may be perfect, it may be not. Just lose a syllable Or go completely Free.
Read unnamed samples of some classic works and you will see That often you can add the names yourself. They are distinctive.
A Shakespeare, A Keats, A Milton Or a Yeats.
What matters is whether a poem works, In some way, At least for yourself.
Wrote the first verse in my notebook early in the morning then took it from there. Inspired by some forum debates.