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Mooom! Loren broke the fourth waaaaaall!

by loren-w-ebeling-esq

I ask you, Please tell me, If you know, I have a question, But the answer eludes me. So you wonderful people of the internet, (Oops, there goes the fourth wall...) This question may not even have an answer. Wouldn't that suck? Ok, so the question. To ponder of yourself. Also, the only really poetic part of this work... (Is critiquing your work in that work pretentious? I don't know. Anyway, back to the poetic crap. ) What world will will you find, When you leave this world behind? And what world will you leave behind, When you run out of time? What will children say of you? What will your legacy be? Did you use each day by day to do Something worth memory?
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loren-w-ebeling-esq
American
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Written by
loren-w-ebeling-esq
American
Published
Apr 22, 2014
Time
2m
Notes

What was that? Does that even count? Can he do that?

I DO WHAT I WANT

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#life#philosophy#memory#significance#legacy#postmodern
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