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Barry Andrew Pietrantonio
Poems
Mar 9
Redrawn
I have been redrawn
My old rendition replaced
With bright new colors and shades
Beneath the veneer
Traces and rough outlines
My foundation sketched in time
The graphite, my blood
It was poured onto the page
Many times it was erased
Unsure who I was
Sketched again and again
Eraser shavings of shame
I was blind to see
These sketches were exactly
who I needed to be
Before I could paint
I needed a rough outline
Before I could find my place
And when I did
The shame was swept away
The brush swiftly hit the page
No longer a sketch
But a beautiful display
Of bright new colors and shades
I have been redrawn
My old rendition replaced
By a colorful bouquet
And thereβs still room for change
First poem posted in nearly 4 years. Life has been a scary yet exciting, beautiful adventure of self discovery. Enjoy!
#redrawn
#growth
#becoming
#life
#change
#transformation
Written by
Barry Andrew Pietrantonio
30/M/Salem, New Hampshire
(30/M/Salem, New Hampshire)
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