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Oct 2020
eating paper by cornonthekob at  eliteskills.com

I need a release
something else to help me see
past the lights of delusion
through the apex of a dream

my comment

Indeed there is much delusion in the semantics of mesmerically enrapturing.  They are in intoxicatingly  inebriating in fact.  Imagination's immaturities can be seductively enticing but they are generally beyond our keen.  Just because we can personify beings with metaphysical mystique doesn't't mean we can touch others or even ourselves with their magic.  It can be difficult to be pragmatically practical when caught in the surreal edifice of the apex of a dream.  The axis crux of id conclusion's continuums should be a cerebral cortex ****** matrix of vast expanse and tenacious extremity.  I wish you success on your quest!!
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Toreinss Pinwinkel III
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