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May 28
You Know ... ?  
I Need To Pick ... Bones ...  
In These ... ****** ...  

... "Comfort Zones" ... !!! ...  

Do You Think Yours ... ?  
Will SAVE You ... ? ...  
  
If You're ...  
... ON YOUR OWN ... !!?!!  
  
How Can This Place ?  
.... " Save You  " .... !?!?!  
From ... NEW Al Capones ... ?!?  
  
Or ...  
  
Save You From THOSE ...  
Who ... DON'T Want To Atone ...  
For ... Problems They've Made ...  
Like Our Lack of ... "OZONE" ...  
  
This AIN'T ... " Charlie Brown !?! "  
  
..............." Linus .............  
Leave Your Towel HOME ... !!! "  
  
Folks .....  
What Will You Do ... ?  
If Your ...  
  
Comfort Zone ...  BLOWS ... !!!!!  
  
... " UP IN YOUR FACE " ... !?!  
  
Just Like Farmyard Hay ...  
On A ... COLD Breezy Day ... !!!  
  
Or ... Youthful Aggression ...  
Ends Up In ... " Your Plate " ... !???!  
  
Let's Keep It REAL ...  
... In Fact ...  
Let's Keep It ... TRUE ... !!!!!  
  
cos' TRUTH In The End ....  
Will DEFINE ...  
  
What is ... " YOU " ... !?!  
  
A ... " Comfort Zone FOOL " ... !!?!!  
  
Or A .... WISE MAN ....
Who's ... " SCHOOLED " ... !!!  
  
Schooled In ... What's FACTUAL ...  
and SCHOOLED In The TRUTH ... !!!!!
  
TRUTH As In ... NATURE ...  
NOT ... Technological Tools ... !!!  
  
Like ...  
Mobiles For ... Children ...  
They're Being ... "MISUSED" ... !!!  
  
These Words Aren't Just ...  
....... "My Views" ...... !!!!!  
  
These Words ARE ...  
... THE TRUTH ... !!!!!!!!
  
Mobiles ... Are Now Used ...  
By ... IGNORANT Youth ...  
To Film ... VIOLENT Actions ... !?!  
  
Just ...
Check In The News ... !!!  
  
Don't Get It Confused ... !!!!!  
You CANNOT Trust Everything ...  
In ... News Reviews ... !!!!!  
  
But DON'T ... overlook ...  
These Types of Issues ... !!!!!
  
Can A ... "Comfort Zone"... ?  
......... " Save You " ........... ?!?  
From ... Youthful Abuse ... ?  
  
Ignore ..................................  
  
If You ... Choose ... !?!  
But ... DON'T Ever Say ...  
You ... Weren't Given Clues ... !!!!!!
  
On How To ....... AVOID .......  
A Case of ... " Muddy's Blues " ...  
  
Water Is NATURAL ...  
Rivers ... Run DEEP ...  
  
But ...  
  
This Is MY VIEW ... !!!  
  
"COMFORT ZONES" ...  
  
You Can ... KEEP ... !!!!!  
  
They Are ...  
For The  ... WEAK ... !!!
  
Who Think They ...  
Can't Weep ... ???!???  
  
I've ...
WEPT For ... " My Mother " ... !!!  
Now She's ... SAFE In Sleep ... !!!
  
You SEE ...  
My Mother Was Sick ...  
For ... Most of My Youth ...  
Which Is Why I'm ... So Able ...  
To Deal With ....... The TRUTH ....... !!!!!
  
SIXTEEN ... Odd Years ... !!!!!  
  
I Feared Shedding Tears ...  
But Now That I'm OLDER ...  
I've Dealt With ... My Fears ... !!!
  
How Many of ... YOU ... ?????  
Would Prefer Some ... New Shoes ...  
  
Rather Than ...  
Have To ... DEAL With ...  
The Things I've Been Through ... ?!?  
  
SEEING ... Your Mother ...  
DISTRESSED By ... Her Lover ... ?!?  
  
Who RAN ... "undercover" ... !?!  
cos' He ... NEVER LOVED HER ... !!!!!  
  
His ACT Was ...  " A BLUNDER " ...  
He ... CAN'T Now RECOVER ... !!!!!!!!
  
Cos' ... Anger I HOLD ...
Now Rumbles Like ...  
  
... " THUNDER " ... !!!!!!  
    
He's In His ... "COMFORT ZONE" ...  
While Your ... Mobile Phone ROAMS ..............................................................  
  
I Don't Have ... Comfort Zones ...  
or A ... " Million Pound Home " ... !!!!!  
  
I'd Rather Be ... "HAPPY" ... !!!!!  
and ... NOT Have To MOAN ....  
  
About ... Tax For My Car ...  
Or The ... "CONGESTION CHARGE" ... !!!!!  
  
I'm Trying To ... MAKE IT ...  
and SHINE Like A ... " STAR " ... !!!!!  
  
Who ...
DOESN'T Just Say  ... " The Same " ...  
  
.... " BLAH DI BLAH BLAH " .... !!!!!  
  
Did You Laugh ... ???  
... " Ha Ha Ha " ... !!!!  
  
But Life ... ISN'T FUNNY ... !!!!  
  
Life's Moving TOO FAST ... !!!  
TOO MANY ... Gun Blasts ... !!!!!  
  
With ...  
  
NO MORE ... " JOHN SHAFTS " ... !!!  
  
TOO MANY ... EMPIRES .... !!!!! ....  
With ... " VADERS For HIRE " .... !!!!!  
  
TOO MANY ... MP'S ... !!!!  
Who ... NEED TO RETIRE ... !!!!  
  
Too Many of US ... !!!  
With ... "Lustful Desires" ... !!!!  
  
Can You ... FEEL MY FIRE ... !?!  
It's ... Making Me TIRED ... !!!  
  
I'm ...  
TIRED of ... TRYING ....  
  
When ....  
So MANY ...  KEEP LYING ... !!!!!!  
  
LYING ... To THEMSELVES ... ???!???  
About Their .... "MENTAL HEALTH" .... !!!  
Because of ... " THEIR WEALTH " ... !!!?!!!  
  
MONEY Is ..... "Paper" ..... !!!  
It's NOT A ... Life Saver ... !!!!  
  
I'm The ... " BLACK " ...  
.... " CAPED CRUSADER " .... !!!!!
  
So ....  
Do Me A FAVOUR.... !!!  
  
REMEMBER THESE WORDS .... !!!  
  
God Is ... YOUR MAKER ...  
But If You're ... NOT CAREFUL ... !!!  
  
He May Be ...  
  
" YOUR BREAKER " ... !!!  
  
Read ... IN BETWEEN Lines ...  
STOP TAKING ... "Coc' Lines" ... !!!!!  
  
Try ...  
Talking With A ... Coc' Head ... ?!?  
  
They're ... " OUT OF THEIR MINDS " ... !!!!!  
  
REPEATING Themselves ...
Pretty Much ... ALL THE TIME ... !!!!!  
  
Now ...  
In These ... LAST LINES ...  
Are Words For ... "The BLIND" ... !!!  
  
OPEN ... Your Eyes ...  
and Then You'll ... REALISE ...  
  
You're NOT ALONE .... !?!
We ALL Have To ... " LIVE HERE " ...  
  
Earth Is ... "OUR HOME" .... !!!!!  
  
DON'T ... EVER Presume ...  
You DESERVE ... What You Own ... !!!!!  
and DON'T ... EVER THINK ... !!!!  
  
You DESERVE ...  
Your Own ... " THRONE " ... !!!  
  
cos' ...  
Those Who Live ... Like THAT ...  
Are DOGS ... WITHOUT Bones ... ?!?  
  
and THESE ARE ...  
The ... " FOOLS " ...  
  
Who ... Live In ...  
  
.... "COMFORT ZONES" .... !!!!
Words for the wise...
It can be ...

A Dangerous place to trap yourself in ...
Big Virge
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Big Virge  Barbados
(Barbados)   
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