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T daniels
Poems
Jan 2019
I Noticed
I noticed her fragrance first
like a rose without thorns,
had she noticed me?
had she seen my pages torn?
We walked to a small stream,
where the heron stands
and tender leaves move unnaturally.
I noticed her ancestral hands,
strong, with immaculate structure
like the temple of Artemis.
We talked and her eyes seemed emboldened
and trust me, I noticed.
#love
#nature
#hope
#peace
#beauty
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T daniels
28/M/hudson nh
(28/M/hudson nh)
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