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I thought you as a cacti

Stop being such a cacti. I’m only trying to move you into sunlight, to let you learn, grow. You were such a cacti because you peirced me with your blunt needle. yet I still bled, because it still peirced me through, and skimmed my bloodflow. I didn’t cry because I realised that is just simply you. You were such a cacti when I tried to water you, my dear. I only wanted to keep you alive keep you radiating. Keep you, as you. This time, your dagger imapled me. From my finger and gushed into my left chest. I now understand you because you won’t hesitate to grow without my nurture, and won’t hesitate to peirce with my love.
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carminayasmin
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Apr 5, 2018
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14 November, night

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#nature#cacti#cactus#love#hurt#betrayal
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