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A Command of Her Own

she writes me from Paris

 

wanting a command,

exactement comme moi

all her own.

to scribe.

in “a style with strength”

 

exactement comme moi

exactly like me

 

where the ideas percolate

for the precise gestation period

and the birth-born poems a-coming

without and within silent no belabored pain,

making the child appear as if it was only waiting

already, on its own good time. for saying thank you

for your patient waiting and who is really in

command?

 

when the overwhelming light orders “write”

I am gone from yesterday and the safe of picayune

does that sound like I am in

command?

 

you wish to command?

 

join the navy, the army,

become a paratrooper,

command in poetry is illusory,

for it comes from the bell tower rage of madness

of what my ancestors planted and bequeathed genetically,

and I have wasted the better half of a century appealing for

relief and making it clear who commands and who is the

“poetoftheway” slave

 

rejoindre la marine, l'armée,

devenir un parachutiste,

commande en poésie est illusoire,

car il vient du clocher de la rage de la folie

de ce que mes ancêtres ont planté et légué génétiquement,

et j'ai gaspillé la meilleure moitié d'un siècle attrayant pour

soulagement et en précisant qui commande et qui est le

“Poetoftheway" esclave

 

exactement comme moi

exactly like me?

 

exactly.

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Feb 25, 2018
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