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Rebecca Sorenson
Poems
Nov 2017
You Said You Loved Me
You said you loved me
You acted as if
You found the key
To your heart
I was young
And stupid
And allowed you to take the breath out of my lungs
Without thinking twice
My friends hated you
They told me I shouldn't
But you... You're like a flu
And I, the vulnerable child
You gave me roses
Black like the night sky above
And got close to me, allowing our noses
To brush softly, your breath mixing with mine
Our lips lock
For the first time, my first kiss
And you gawk
As we pull away, breathless
Everything was good
My friends were wrong about you
And so I allowed you to take my girlhood
Maybe that wasn't a good idea
You started acting weird
You would avoid, yell, and pester me
And I feared
That I had made a mistake
I broke it off
And I ran
And sobbed and coughed
In my friends' arms
They were right
You were rotten
And though, I thought you were my knight...
I realized I was blinded by the idea of dark love
#breakup
#love
#pain
#story
Written by
Rebecca Sorenson
19/F
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