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Noah A
Poems
Aug 2017
Unforgivable Life (Regrets [Part 4])
My life...
Is...
Unforgivable...
I don't know...
What... to do...
What should I do...?
Someone...
Help... me
Help...
me
I regret...
Many things...
I regret...
Doing what... I did... Alone
To become...
Unforgivable...
But I can't go back...
I can't say... I was... wrong
I cant be wrong...!
They must... understand
If they don't...
They will see me... as...
As a monster...
For the rest...
Of my unforgivable...
Life...
I need your help! I want to know if I should make my character suffer endlessly, or help him. Or maybe just end the story right here? What do you guys think? Please write what you think in the comments section! Thanks!
#unforgjvable
#life
#regrets
#monster
#broken
#miserable
#alone
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Noah A
M/Illinois
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