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Poems
Jul 2017
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Have you ever felt,
Longing for something?
Rather, someone,
You linger to be yours?
Felt the heat of the waves,
Of your undying shame.
Oh, you no-no wonder why,
She wasn't afraid?
Afraid of haunting you more,
Caressing, pretending.
She's yours and you're hers.
But there was "never an us?".
Us is a big word
Full of responsibilities and sincerity
That kept you from striving and crying.
Until your heart fade in despair.
Have you ever felt loved?
Because I, never felt her,
Back.
I was wondering about life. I love loving and giving. And I questioned God on why he created me like this ?
Please criticize the poem. I'll appreciate it
#love
#lost
#searching
#soul
#wandering
#wander
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