I don't believe you, That I can't change the past. I believe that I only need The right level of access. I'll live in the past with my friend regret Refusing to venture further future. I'll cling to hope misplaced long ago With almost enough rope to hang With more than enough to secure Familiar safe harbour. Or perhaps to suspend belief from high hopes Long enough to cast adrift With just the ever present wind to give direction.
Draft #2 I don't believe you, That I can't change the past. I believe that I only need To dwell on it a little more. I'll harbour in the past with my friend, regret, Refusing to venture further future. I'll cling to hope misplaced long ago With almost enough rope to hang, With more than enough to fasten To that familiar safe haven And one day I'll suspend my belief from high hopes, Forlorn and cast adrift With a tried and true ill wind to give direction And find safe pasture.
Draft #3 I don't believe you, That I can't change my past. I believe that I only need To dwell on it a little more And so prise it open. I'll shelter with my old friend, Regret, Refusing to venture further future. I'll cling to a hope that I misplaced long ago With almost enough rope to hang from, With more than enough to fasten myself To that familiar safe haven. And one day I'll suspend my belief From high hopes, forlorn and cast adrift, With my tried and tested ill wind That will direct me and will find me a well worn safe past and safe pasture.
Why is the future so scary? I've added redrafts. Curious as to whether you consider the redrafting adds value.