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Sweet

They tell her she is talented with special skills to spare they say she’s got a winning smile and sunbeams in her hair She would end her skill today and suffer every defeat she would cut off all her hair if she could just be sweet They tell her that she’s popular that she could win a crowd they say she fills the room with cheer her friends all laugh aloud She would be shy as a mouse quiet and discrete she’d give up all of her fake friends if she could just be sweet They say she wears the greatest clothes she has the greatest style they say she has a pretty face the boys would chase for miles She would empty her whole closet throw her clothes out in the street she would wear an ugly mask if she could just be sweet They say she dances with such grace she sings in perfect tune her elegance is unrivaled she makes the whole room swoon She would trip upon herself and sound like an old goat’s bleat she would lose her every limb if she could just be sweet So many things they call her talented, beautiful, witty, if she could not merely be sweet then what’s the point of pretty? The compliments she gets from everyone she meets all of them are true and nice, but none of them are “sweet.”
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This is meant to cause the reader to analyze the compliments we as a society hold in high regard, and to think about whether or not such compliments are truly worthwhile.

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