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The Orca

by jackwestland

Amidst the forever blue expanse, Upon the raft I built, Alone I sit, it quivers. I feel it squirm below myself, It cries and creaks under the weight. Beneath it still the emptiness, The vast and silent water. Without a noise it calls to me, I hear it mock my presence. It laughs that soon the raft will fail. And this I know too well. How the sky does weep for me. No sail or sun to guide myself, The horizons sarcastic smile. I witnessed nothing but blue on blue, Not one fish, nor bird, nor boat. For years I drift in currents, None of my design. Alone and lost, The Orca came. Alone together, lost, afraid, I know she knows my sorrow. I meet her eyes, For a moment I feel solitude. Perhaps my Orca sees me. But off she swims, Blind to me. I watch her leave my presence. I cannot shout, I know no words. I forget what it means to talk. Alone together, lost, afraid. I know she knows my sorrow.
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Written by
jackwestland
Published
Apr 10, 2016
Time
2m
Notes

A tale of depression, the protagonist sits upon an unsecure raft barely keeping them from falling into the never ending ocean. He sits alone with no control.

The orca a representation of another depressive, how different they both are and one does not recognise the other. So unalike in the same struggle, they part ways with no salvation.

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